A SPINACH SUP
This morning, me and my mother go to traditional market. We buy same vegetable. What Popeye’s eat is my vegetable favorite. So this morning my mother will buy a spinach. My mother will make a spinach sup.
After we buy all material’s to cooking, we go to where we live. We need 10 minute to arrive in the our house. Than we go to kitchen, we both cooking together.
After finish, we are breakfast together too. And I go to where I get knowledge.
Where I study is UMS, in English department student of teacher training.
Name : RELIS KRISTIANI
Nim : A320090159
Class : structure 4 / C
Dear Relis,
BalasHapusThe content of your writing is good enough. However you have made some mistakes in your sentence structures, such as: me and my mother go to traditional market.It should be my mother and I go .....We buy same vegetable.It should be We buy some vegetables. What Popeye’s eat is my vegetable favorite.It should be What Popeye eats is my favorite vegetable. After we buy all material’s to cooking. It should be After we buy all the materials to cook. We need 10 minute should be We need 10 minutes.we both cooking together should be Both my mother and I cook together. After finish, we are breakfast together should be After finishing, we have breakfast together.Where I study is UMS, in English department student of teacher training should be Where I study is in UMS, at English department student of School of Teacher Training and Education.
Thanks for your attention.
See you
thanks Mr. for your comment...
BalasHapusI will try to be better